Heh heh. Puns. The vision is superb, it shows the T-shirt and the basic design used as the background. There isn't too much light nor too much dark, so it can be clearly seen. I would honestly have ironed the shirt before photographing it, because it would a lot more professional and clean. The text also shows up well, it is not too small or big, so it could be seen from a fair distance away. The originality is flat out awesome, I would have never thought of something that clever,(that rhymes)it is a cute pun as well. I would also make designs similar to this, but just with a different type of sushi on top. The other points are the same, I like the cute expressions on the rolls, and I think people would either smile from the cuteness, or groan from the pun. Overall great job. You make a good T-shirt designer.
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